Today is the second day of online school and the theme today is chocolate we have a new theme everyday. I learnt some cool stuff about chocolate like when it was made or where it was made. I hope you enjoy.
Good work Alayna! Your report is well written with good use of full stops and different sentence lengths. I like how you use explanation writing as your purpose, with words like "First, Secondly". Really good organisation of ideas. Did you design some chocolate shapes and flavours to go in the box? Keep up the great work.
Good work Alayna! Your report is well written with good use of full stops and different sentence lengths. I like how you use explanation writing as your purpose, with words like "First, Secondly". Really good organisation of ideas. Did you design some chocolate shapes and flavours to go in the box? Keep up the great work.
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